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Could this really be happening?
You standing next to me
Your hands on my waist
Our lips touching gently

Could this really be happening?
Us gazing at the endless stars
Talking about everything
Being who we really are

Could this really be happening?
Can my heart be racing?
Our hands together
Fingers lacing

Could this really be happening?
These shivers down my spine
You holding me close to you
Are you really mine?

Could this really be happening?
Me saying "I love you."
You wispering it back
And you're being true

Could this really be happening?
Everything we feel
Just do me a favor
Promise me this is real
©2008-2009 ~gizzygirl
:icongizzygirl:

Author's Comments

I wrote this poem and my mom found it and wrote a note to me saying it was really beautiful. She hasn't done that before when she has found my poems so it makes me feel good. ^^
Inspired by true feelings

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:iconskygray:
very lovely, gizz

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How come every time I'm finally happy some emotion comes along and screws it up? How come that emotion is always LOVE?
:iconthephantom357:
aww i like it a lot. Its very sweet :)
:icongizzygirl:
Awww, thanks. ^^

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I looooooe yoooooou... on a stick! :analprobe: on a glowy stick! :XD:
:icongizzygirl:
Thank you Sparky. (Haha... Sparky...)

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I looooooe yoooooou... on a stick! :analprobe: on a glowy stick! :XD:

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